Wednesday, June 27, 2012

An Excerpt from Old Stories

I have been writing, I just sadly have been neglecting this blog. :( Book 1 is finished and in the editing stages. Book 2 is in the writing stage with a bit of research mixed in. Books 3 and 4 (yes, already!) have been outlined loosely.

In the meantime, I wanted to share this. It's something I wrote in high school. I found one of my writing notebooks filled with unfinished stories. This is all I have of this story idea. It's sort of weird but it's giving me ideas. I might have to turn this excerpt into a short story. ;) Here it is:


                I flopped onto the bus seat with a sigh of resignation. Another day… I didn’t even want to think about it. I slid over to the window and put my backpack on the seat next to me. Nobody was going to sit with me, so what did it matter? I stared out the window and thought of the games that I used to play with myself when I was little.
                The little elf and fairy that I imagined were a favorite of mine. They would skate along on the patches of ice in the marsh alongside the road. They would hold hands and twirl around, then leap into the air to make it to the next frozen patch and keep up with the bus. Both of them liked to keep me company on my long drive to school – the elf with his mischievous smile and the fairy with her pretty glittering eyes. Sadly, they could only keep up with the bus as long as there were patches of ice along the road. So, we had to say our farewells when we left the marsh and longer farewells when the heat of the spring sun melted their paths.
                I could almost see my imagined creatures dancing alongside of the bus now. But I was now too old for childish fantasies, as the world around me had forced me to grow up fast.
                The girl sitting in the seat in front of me began to sing some made-up song of hers. She always sat alone as well, but for her it was more of her choice. I had no friends on the bus and no one would dare sit with me. No matter. If someone sat with me I couldn’t spend the time thinking and imagining. To the outside world I seemed too serious, too mature. Little did they know the things that went on in my mind – the only place I allowed myself to be creative and, yes, even a little childish.
                On the bus I was mostly safe. Often I wished the bus would drive all day and I wouldn’t end up at school but, alas, my wish never came true.
                I turned my attention to the back of the seat in front of me and without even thinking about it, I began another favorite pastime. There were so many images interwoven into the texture of the seats. It was a lot like staring at the clouds or an inkblot. Depending on my mood, I saw different things everyday even though I always sat in the same seat. Today, the duck looked more like a giant bird with his mouth open, ready to eat anything in his path. The tea party was still the same as yesterday, though. Two creatures silently drank tea at a table while the grotesque giant bird glared on from nearby.
                Conversations continued on around me but I didn’t hear them. My world consisted of the scenery out the window, the seat before me, and the fantasies that my mind created.
                My mind drifted from the creatures trapped in the seat and I began to wonder what would happen if someone threw a pin and it poked someone else right in the eye. I cringed at the thought and shifted uncomfortably in the seat. I hated it when weird and squirm-worthy thoughts popped into my head. I turned my attention to the window again to remove the image from my mind; and with dismay I realized that the school was just beyond the hill the color of chocolate milk because of its covering of muddy snow.
                I sighed again and started to pack my things up. Even if the day was terrible, I still had the bus ride home to look forward to. This thought comforted me as I filed off the bus with the other students and faced another day of problems, ridicule, and hard work. At least I had the quiet time on the bus ride home as my solace.

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